▶ Your Answer : Undoubtedly,
the environment plays a significant role in people's daily lives in many of the
places where they work or play. Some people might think the situation will not
get any better, while others do not. Both sides may have their own reasons to
support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say the condition
of the environment can be eased up as people put in more effort. Let
me take an example of an energy problem. I think the problems of traditional
energy sources will be solved because it can be replaced by cheaper alternative
energy sources. Electricity generated by nuclear powerplants can be the one.
Fossil fuels are limited in supply and sensitive to price fluctuations.
Governments and individuals who are well-aware of such dangers are willing to
actively participate and invest in the development of new energy sources. For
instance, the U.K. government is boosting new incentives such as more
subsidies, exemption of congestion charges, and tax benefits to encourage more
individuals to purchase electric hybrid cars. The government is also promising
to expand solar battery charging stations for electric cars in London. To take
advantage of these benefits, many of its citizens are affirming their supports
through the purchasing of electric cars. As a result, the sales of electric
cars have been continuously increasing every year. Many other countries that
acknowledge the merits of this approach are applying this to their own
countries to cooperate on a global level. When the government implements more
sustainable policies and individuals actively participate in them, this joint
effort can prevent destroying the environment.
In
brief, I strongly believe that the environmental condition will be getting better
for the reasons I have mentioned above. All in all, small efforts can lead to
a big difference.
왜 body는 하나밖에 없나요? 두개 이상이면 주장 전달에 더 좋을 것 같아요 어휘는 많이 기본적이고, 반복되는 편입니다. 조금 더 다양한 어휘나 표현 쓸 수 있게 공부 더 하시면 너무 좋을 것 같아요. 그리고 conclusion에서는 내용 summary 조금 더 해주시면 내용 정리 너무 좋을 것 같습니다
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