▶ Your Answer :
Many
people prefer to read books in their free time. However, I think watching
movies is more satisfying way to enjoy my
pastime. There are a couple of reasons for
it. I can understand story better via movies and it is boring to read books.
To begin with, people can understand the
story very well. When people read books, it is hard to understand the whole
story. Hence, people cannot be satisfied with
it. However, movie helps people understand
the story better. For example, I read the book, Aladdin, it was hard to understand story. Nevertheless, when I watched it
in movie, I could finally understand the story. Also, it satisfied me. Due to
my experience, reading books always makes me confused to figure out the hidden
meaning of the story and keeps me frustrated
during pastime. In addition, I can feel how the character is. The movies keep
communicating with audience by showing sounds and visual things effect while
reading only has written letter.
For the second reason, it is boring when
people read books.(중의적 문장, no clear meaning) When people read books, it is so quiet and no additional
effect on it. However, if people go to movie, there are visual and sound
effects. These effects make people focus more on the story. Then this satisfies
people. (위 paragraph와 내용이 너무 겹칩니다) For instance, my friend was not interested at any story and wasted her
pastime. Nevertheless, when she watched movie ‘Harry potter’, she became a big
fan of it. Hence, she started to read books of it but it was so boring that she
quit to be a fan of it and kept waste her
time. Moreover, it is not possible to read books with your friends. Reading
books is only possible to read alone while watching movies can be together. In
other words, it is much better to spend pastime with others than be alone.
Hence, watching movie is more exciting than reading books.
To sum up, watching movies can satisfy
your free time by help you understand story as well as exciting.
문장을 어떻게 쓰는지 잘 모르시는 듯 합니다. 대부분의 문장들이 매우 짧고, 많이 반복적이며 정확한 meaning을 내포하지 않고 있습니다. 예를 들어 of it, satisfying이라는 단어가 정말 많이 나오고, 문장 안에서도 중의적인 의미를 가지고 있는 듯한 어구가 너무 많이 보여 해석이 정말 힘들었습니다. 제 생각에는 다른 에세이 많이 읽어보고, 어휘 공부부터 시작하시면 너무 좋을 것 같습니다. |