▶ Your Answer :
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires careful deliberations. Even though some adamantly believe that it would be much better for school to invest money in Art and volunteer work, I strongly think such an opinion lacks coherence to some extent for the following reasons. First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that investing more money in sports can engender a myriad of favorable consequences. The main reason behind this rationale is that students at school mostly spend their time studying and participating in discussions, which mean they have no enough time to play and enjoy their life. Especially as for Korean students, they spend their most time studying even when they are in elementary school. So, I believe that the school should invest in sports facilities so that students can enjoy and play in order to stay healthy. By doing so, students can release their stress in healthy ways so that they can maintain their active participation in their studying. All in all, students should not and cannot overlook the importance of healthy. On top of this, investing more money in art and volunteer work can result in unfavorable ramifications. Appreciating artworks and attending volunteer works are not priority for students due to the fact that students should study in order to get a permission from Universities. In fact, even if the school did not enhance their art and volunteer work facilities, there are enough great museums and private or public organizations to experience volunteer stuff out of the world. Therefore, students at school can appreciate museums and attend volunteer work during their vacations. It would be not a burden for students because the time is a vacation. In addition to this, students can enjoy prestigious artworks at popular museums and can experience something new in organizations like NGOs or the UN. However, as for the school, the contents they could provide are limited. It is as clear as day to me that investing in sports would benefit more students in many ways. Yes, it is virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out on the given topic, we can come to a mutual agreement that it would be very beneficial for students to have great sports facilities by investing money for the reasons and details mentioned above. |