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Some people often say "Boys be ambitious!" However, in my opinion, it is better to be realistic. There are two reasons. First, one can do the right thing for one's career after watching his real position. Second, it can be happier. (it이 무엇인가요?)
To begin with, people's life can be more successful. In this hyper - competitive society, having a successful life is like a camel passing through a head of the needle. Even getting a job is harder than ever. So just with having ambitious dream is not helpful. People have to realize their position, then they can do anything to upgrade their life.
There was a survey done by Job Korea which asked thousand people who work at business center "What is the most important factor to catch the crown for your job?" . Over seventy two percent of people chose being realistic and doing things step by step. This showed that it is crucial for people not only to think about their rank but also do one's best.
On the top of that, it can be happier. If one has an ambitious dream (단수/복수), one must struggle to achieve his goal. But if you regard your realistic position or dream, you do not have to give much efforts to something that is not realistic. Moreover, it can be able to make you take a breath and happy.
To give an anecdote, I was struggled with ambitious goal about entering the medical university. But after failure, I became realistic, and I thought deeply.It was hard to enter any medical school because of my grade, so I changed my next goal to (전치사 필요합니다) entering the Korea university, medical-science major. Had it not been for thinking about my real position, it would not have been possible to enter the Korea university.
To sum up, one is able to do the better things to reach the realistic goal after being realistic. Furthermore, one can be happier. For those reasons, I firmly believe that being realistic is better than having an (관사 필요합니다) ambitious dream.
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1. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
+) 단어를 외우실 때 스펠링을 집중적으로 외워주세요.
2. '고려대학교' 와 같은 고유명사 앞에는 the와 같은 관사가 붙지 않습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*