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Words alone cannot express the
importance of possessions. One should not, however, fall prey to the
misconception that fewer possessions makes you happier. I, therefore, strongly
believe that more possessions makes you happier. There are two reasons that
underscore the validity of this statement.
Firstly, I think that people who can do
it what they want are happier than others. For example, if you want to buy some
clothes or electronics, more money
make you can buy what you want. Luxury clothes help you to get self-esteem and
state of the art device help you live more convenient in our busy society.
Also, If you and your children want to learn something, you can make good
condition for learning when you have money to pay for. You can register the
academy and buy books, etc. These activity and satisfactory environment make
our happier. On the contrary, if you cannot do these things, you may be
depressed. This is because lower possessions make us to choice only few
options.
Secondly, in the TV document program,
there are people who cannot be treated for diseases due to deficient funds.
Nowadays, medical technologies are really increased and if the level of disease
is not that much serious, medical doctor can heal the pain or something. But there is the only requirement that patients
have to pay for this bills.
In the development countries, lots of
people die everyday due to poor medical devices and fewer doctors. If they have
more possessions such as more high technology devices or money to pay for the
doctors, lots of people do not necessary to die. I think it is really sad story.
Through this documentary, I have totally agreed that more possessions makes
people happier.
As I mentioned above, to live happier
life, we have to get more possessions. The importance of the possessions in our
society can never be overestimated, so I would like to urge people to wake from
the illusion that fewer possessions can make your life happy. I would not think
twice before choosing to do so.
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