■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Comprehending the past is crucial to being able to tackle obstacles facing us now and in the future. |
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▶ Your Answer :
There might be some people who believe it
does not help us to comprehend the past in terms of coping with the present and
the future. However, in my opinion, we should fully understand and refer to the
past so that we can tackle obstacles facing us now and later. Comprehending the
old time's situations allows us to extract effective methods from the past and
to have progress by fixing the past problems.
To begin with, we can extract great
information from the past and apply it in the present and the future. If we
ignore the past experience, we do not have any base or reference. However, referring to the behavior
and the result of the past, we can obtain valuable knowledge that was verified
in real life/reality. For
example, a government faces many economic issues to be solved like deflation
and unemployment. Then, it can launch a research on how the famed figure of the
nation coped with the similar problems in the past such as the Great
Depression. The policies and measurements that helped can be reused for the
current situation. Some people might say that the past
is different from these days regarding historical and societal background.
However, we can consider the extra factors and apply the methods on the current
circumstance to fit it.
On top of that, while we contemplate on the past, we can find out the serious problems
that existed then and figure out how to complement them. If we are not retrospective of
the past, we have no idea what we did wrong or lacked. This may
negatively work later on when we face similar issues to be dealt with.
Therefore, it is important to understand the cause, process, means, and results
of the past circumstance. To give one of my personal experiences, I took a
college entrance exam twice. When I was preparing for the second exam, I
carefully looked back on my previous studying
style and its problem that leads to unsuccessful results. Accordingly, I could
find my significant trouble which was skipping reviews
and just solving as many questions as I could. In the second college entrance
exam, I got a much better score because I made efforts to modify my learning
habit and shift it in an effective method.
To sum up, from the past, we can have
important background information and fix the previous problems, leading to
improved consequence. For these reasons, I agree with the following statement.
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