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Some people think that movies and books do not always need to show good people winning and bad people losing. However, in my opinion, I believe that entertainments such as movies and books should show people who have good mind usually win and who are like evil loose. This is because a lot of people are influence by movies and books so they have to give a positive impact on people, and such a story that describes good people winning can be more fun. To begin with, Movies and books should have a story of good people winning 조금 더 다른 표현을 썼다면 좋을 것 같아요. topic에 있는 문장을 그대로 들고오는 것은 좋지 않습니다. because it has variety of impact on people. These days, many people enjoy to watch a movie and read books. Therefore, these materials have a great influence on people who live in this world. To give them a positive impact and desirable way of life, movies and books have to show good people winning and bad people losing.losing과 loosing은 아주 다른 단어입니다. For example, my younger sister loves to watch a sci-fi movies. She often watch movies with me on weekend. One day, she watched a movie 'beautiful mind' which shows the disable people and their tough life. After watching it, she told me that she learned how the disabled people's life is and she wanted to help them in real life. She even did a volunteer work for them. 예시가 너무 장황한 것 같아요. 무조건 point만 짚고 넘어가는 것이 가장 좋습니다.
On top of that, movies and books that shows good people winning and bad people loosing 이런식으로 반복할 필요 없습니다. tend to be more fun. A lot of people actually have a great desire to see 'the justice win' in the movie or book because they want to be compensated with their hurt mind caused by bad people in the real life. This is true that you can see when people watch a movie which shows a bad person win, people even shout to them with a anger. This means that people want to see the good people win and bad people loose. For instance, when I was reading a book 'Time thief', which describes a thief who has a bad reputation and always hurt others. When I finished to read this book, I was so disappointed and even though that this book is not fun at all because it's ending showed that the thief won. This shows that people want to see the justice wining and consider it is more fun. loose가 많이 나옵니다. 단어들이 많이 반복되고, 또기본적인 범주 내에서 계속 나오는 것 같아요 다양한 표현이나 숙어 쓸 수 있도록 노력해야합니다. To sum up, I think that movies and books should show people who have good mind usually win because a lot of people are influence by movies and books, and such a story that describes good people winning can be more fun. In this regard, I agree with the statement that movies and books should show good people winning and bad people losing. |