▶ Your Answer : Considering In the modern society, an ability to lead others well is increasingly emphasized. Some people might argue that leadership is innate comes naturally so one cannot learn to be a leader. Contrary to this popular belief, I think that one can learn how to get a leadership skill by making a great according to one's effort. To support my stance, the following explanation will further elaborate on my perspective.
One of the remarkable aspects of the ongoing topic is that everyone has a talent to imitate others. It is undeniable fact that people are likely to follow a person who they want to be. Therefore, if a person who is respected has gifts related to a good leadership such as listening to other people, having charisma, supervising members, surrounding people around him or her would gradually gain the person's skills since they have eager to want to be like the person. My youngest brother, for example, used to be introverted when he was younger. However, He changed little by little after he met a new friend named Jimin who was equipped with skills of leadership. He realized that his lack of confidence can cause harm to members (What kinds of harm?) when he became a leader by observing Jimin. He gradually became confident since he tried to resemble his friend's behavior and now, he is one of the people who are praised by teachers because of their his leadership. This implies that being a person who has leadership depends on each effort to imitate others' people.
Another reason which deserves to say some words here is that one can acquire information about how to command members well by the Internet. It is attributed to the fact that Thanks to the enormously developed technology, especially the Internet in modern days, people are able to get information they need with one mouse click. There are tons of useful tools such as YouTube, Twitter, various news and so on. Therefore, when people come to wonder about the qualities of great leader, they can easily learn the skills just by watching contents regarding teaching to them with regard to leadership. My youngest brother whom I explained above can be illustrated to prove this point. Due to his friend named Jimin, he became to know what the characteristic of an excellent leader is but he still wanted to know other leader's qualities of famous celebrities so he started to research on YouTube in order to find out that. Consequently, he became aware of a common feature between a good leader. They all had skill of listening to their group members' opinion so he gradually has acquired the ability. This shows that leadership can be acquired by one's strive for gaining information through the Internet.
In conclusion, by contemplating all the reasons which I mentioned above, I firmly believe that leadership can be gained comes through one's own efforts. trying, not naturally
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