It is better for students in high schools and universities to learn about particular fields and jobs than to study general subjects.
Recently, there has been many debates about
whether it is better for students in high school and university students to
learn about particular jobs or fields than study general subjects. Some people
may think that it is better for students to learn general subjects. However, it
seems to be clear that it is way more important for the students to learn about
particular fields or jobs in their school. There are several reasons why it is
more beneficial for them to learn such things. First, it allows students in
high school to choose their majors in their college by experiencing diverse
jobs. Second, students in the university will get used to how their work goes
in the field and makes their skill better. Lastly, learning general subject
could be waste of their time because they can not learn how to make money
directly.
First of all, learning about particular jobs allows the high school students to think more about selecting their future jobs. By experiencing the real atmospheres of the diverse works, they can get the sense of what kind jobs exist and they can find what they are capable of. According to the research of 1000 high school (띄어쓰기) students in New York city, 89% of the students who had learned mainly about diverse jobs were able to find their job aptitude. Whereas only 8% of students who mainly learned general subjects were able to find their job capability. In a nutshell, it can be concluded based on the weight of the evidence that learning about particular jobs may help student to select their job in future.
Moreover, it is also beneficial for the university students who have already decided their major for their work. The students can enhance their skills even before they start their job so, it helps them to start their work with high level of performance from the beginning. It has been already proven that (컴마 필요 x) 80% of students who have learned knowledge on their jobs by experiencing the fieldwork when they are in college performed better in their jobs than the students who just learn general subjects even in their university in Job Performance Competition in 2018. Therefore, it is beneficial for the students in university to learn knowledge on their jobs will help them to make better performance.
Lastly, learning general subjects (단/복수) is not practical in terms of making high profits in their jobs. The contents of the major subjects are not really directly related to making money in their jobs. Many job researchers argue that it is impossible for them to make money in the real jobs by using the knowledge of major subjects. They said that the students can learn more practical knowledge by just learning about the skills directly related to their jobs because those knowledges are more advanced and practical than that of general subjects.
In conclusion, it is way better for the students to learn about practical jobs and field than learning general subjects. And there are three persuasive reasons behind this.
-
1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. conclusion의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
4. 철자 오류가 잦은 편입니다. 심한 감점의 요인이 될 수 있으니, 에세이 작성을 마치시고 꼼꼼히 검토해주세요.
+) 단어를 외우실 때 스펠링을 집중적으로 외워주세요.