Toefl Acutal Test 4
In the lecture, the speaker from the listening contends that the reading's claim is groundless. This casts doubt on the reading's point that congestion pricing provides significant benefits.
First, the speaker argues that if congestion pricing will start, severe (철자오류) accidents will be more generated than before. This is because a reduction in the volume of traffic causes cars' speed to grow up. In reality, thirty percent of accidents increased in area where congestion pricing started. This is in contradictory to the reading passage's insistence that congestion pricing makes driving much safer because of decreasing accidents.
Second, the speaker maintains that city's public transportation will become uncomfortable as time goes by. This is because when people use more public transportation, it will be more crowded. Thus, it will be much difficult for people to catch the bus at once since there will be already a lot of people in bus. This is in direct opposition to the reading passage's assertion that congestion pricing helps city's public transportation network to become more convenient to use.
Last, the speaker mentions that a positive impact on businesses is not real. This is because retailers should drive their personal cars when they go into the city. Therefore, if congestion pricing will generate, they may start to complain the system. This rebuts the reading passage's point that congestion pricing affects businesses positively.
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