▶ Your Answer :Everyone knows that university students are more disengaged than high school or middle school students. They enjoy playing and meeting various people outside the classroom. Some people claim that accumulate experiences (What is it?) outside school is more important than having an experience inside the school. Nevertheless, I think attending classes is as important as having an experience outside the classes. There are several reasons.
First of all, by building taking many courses, you can build earn the knowledge of various fields. For example, in university, there are many courses such as major courses and the subjects for general education courses such as English, Spanish, writing, or ecology. These courses are important profitable in studying deeply and you can become cultured people not simply easy going people enjoying lightly playing. (Hard to understanding) Getting Building various knowledge is important in today's societies because you can make use of it in many fields which you can get a job.
Second, taking different courses provides chances to explore your potential. Many people wander about what they really want to do and they also don't know which fields they are good at. In college, there are many courses to become an expert or an educated person. You can freely choose courses you want to learn unlike prior school curriculum. In my case, I major in arts but that sometimes made me bored make me boring. So I take took architecture courses of sophomore. That sometimes made make me hard to study and there are many trial and errors. However, In classes of last day, I was praised by professors and I discovered little potentials of architects. (Then, what happened?)
In conclusion ally. people who are age of university students want to play well (Why did you say 'play well'?) and some of them believe that going to classes should be optional. But there are many chances of learning something, and also I think that age of university students are age of learning. (Hard to understand) For these reasons, I agree that university students should be required to attend classes.
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