▶ Your Answer :mobile phones have given pp more freedom. The consensus seems to be that many people are isolated from the society and feel uncomfortable due to the development of mobile phones. However in my opinion, I strongly support the idea that smart phones make most of the people feel free and enjoyable. Because we can take a break in the middle of our works through the phone. Also it contains a lot of useful programs. To begin with, many highschool students can enjoy their rest time(break times) with their phones. they can communicate with their friends and family all over the world. So they can feel freedom wherever they are. I will talk about my own experience to illustrate this point. When I was younger I had to go abroad to study english. first of all I felt really loneliness and unhappy. I even thought that i’m isolated from the society. The english class was too boring and I did not know what to do. However I realized that I can interact with my lifelong friends and families through my smart phones. also I could recognize that I was not alienated student and I could even feel a sense of freedom. So I can enjoy my time and freedom in the middle of the class through my phones. On top of that, with the development of the mobile applications we can do whatever we want. In fact many people do not have to carry their wallet. because you can remit the money. also you can pay your bills. A study was conducted by the professor Jang in the gallup organization to determine what can smart phone make possible with 200 university students as participants. they answered they can remit the money without going to the bank and even listen to the description of the financial products. They also responded that with their phones they feel free and possible whatever they want. Lastly some of the people said they can go on a trip only with their phones. In a nutshell, they can spend their time interacting with their families nationwide. also they can utilize the phone instead of going to the bank. In this regard, mobile phone make us feel comfortable and free from the fast paced world.
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