주제 : The university should spend more money on the library rather than on sports.
-disagree
Some people think that the university should spend more money on the library rather than other activity. This is because they think that the library enables students to study harder whenever they get lazy. However, in my opinion, the college should spend money on the sports activity. There were two reasons. First, sports allow students to expand their human relationships by forming a strong bond with members of sports team. Second, students can be healthy by doing sports activity.
On the top of that, sports activity providing students with diverse experience that from building friendship to making special memories. The meaning of success has completely changed compared to the past in the world. If it was merely focusing on one's own way and excelling others, now it is different. Along with your own ability, it is crucial to have people who can lend you a hand when you are in trouble. I will give my anecdote as an example. When I was a university school student, I had a hard time adapting to school. Due to my timid personality. I had difficulty hanging out with peers. However, Susan, my middle school friend, recommended me to try to talk to my peers by having confidence and I accepted her advice. As a result I began to talk to my university friends, and It was successful. Had it not been for Susan's advice I would not been able to make friends. Likewise people will be able to change their life like turning point after making new friends through diverse experience. my experience proved that It is who you know, not what you do, that makes you succeed.
Second, students can be healthy by doing diverse activity like sports. To be specific, the importance of health should be prioritized. Without good health, nothing can be achieved. Like there is a saying "Sound body, sound mind" being in shape enables people to maximize their work productivity and be self-confident. For example, a study was conducted by Korean Board of Education is determined whether health could affect academic performance. There were two groups monitored. The first group was formed by people who exercise more than three times a week. They were asked to take test to measure their level of academic performance. The other group consisted of work out less than three times a week and they were given same direction. The researchers compared the outcomes and recorded that the first group had significantly higher the academic performance. The reason was that healthy people had good physical strength, it can lead to excellent academic performance.
To sum up, when it comes to making friends, playing sports can be of big help for expanding their social network. Moreover sufficient doing activity shape students to be the healthy person. In this regard, the university should spend money on sports rather than on the library.