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Some people might say that books give us more valuable knowledge than personal experiences. Because books give us the knowledge that we never experience before. It is true in a sense. Despite this advantage that books give us, I think that personal experience is more valuable Because it is more vivid and books can convey some wrong information.
Nowadays, we can get a lot of information by reading books. Think about a trip. I always dreamed of traveling to Europe, so I used to read books related to Europe. There were many resources like author’s personal story, pictures, and recommendations. It really inspired me and made me imagine an Europian life. However, when I actually went to Europe, I could not compare the trip with experience that books gave me. The real trip was far more vivid and excited. When I met Eiffel Tower first, I was just stunned. I can forget books’ information But I will never forget the memory of my Europe trip. Of course, sometimes books serve as useful advisor. But if you ask about value, I attend that my trip experience is more precious than experience that book gave me.
There are a lot of books today. Many people might think that it is good for us. But sometimes I think it is a problem that there are too many books. We can not read all the books, so it is hard to choose one. Moreover, if you choose an one book and get a content, you can confront the contrasted content when you read other books. It would make you confuse. I believe that reliability is very important when we talk about value. When I was a university student, I was assigned a report in movies theory class. For the report, I had to choose a movie so I read some books asociated with movies to get some advice. But the books had each one’s opinion, even conflicted in some parts. I got confused so I just watched a few movies and I choose one myself. Personal experience does not tell me a lie because I directly experience it. personal experience even teachs me what is really good for me.
A book has its value. But personal experiences are more precious and reliable experiences than books for me. Therefore, I think that personal experiences are more valuable.
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