■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
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▶ Your Answer : It is debatable whether reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information . Although both methods are clearly very important, I firmly believe that reading paper materials is far better than watching electronic devises for the following reasons . First, paper materials have more specialized information. When we search for information, the quality of the content cannot be fell out. So, papers containg many experiments, studies, and papers are valuable than Internet. Nowadays, there are so many unknown datas and it is hard to distinguish. For example, the importance of reading books rises suddenly. Why? Modern people wants to gain information easily with out hard works. So they don't actually read books and far away from paper materials. If the electronic devices are the best, people should be smater than before. But in reality it doesn't. Rather people became stupid and lazy.
Second, paper materials have distinct sources. When you have written a paper, you will know the origin of the imformation is a fundamental concept. No matter how you wrote the essay best without the source, it marks zero. This is an absolute thing. In paper materials, you can see the origin in your eyes clearly. However information from elevtronic devises are not. They are mixed together without accurate writer. Then you won't use it because of missed source. Through this instance, I realized that Internet is not always best. Electronic devises are the lastest techonlgy, but for the core of gaining information, it does not pretty impact.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delieverd with the reasons metioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact on our future. |
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