■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :It is sometimes acceptable to infringe upon people's freedom |
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Innumerable people have alleged that infringing upon mankind’s freedom is not acceptable. Of course , this assertion is quite meaningful to acknowledge people’s value due to there is a tremendous benefit in our society . However, in my case, I do not go along with this notion. There is a key factor that underpins my opinion.
To begin with , contemporary society is so competitive and efficient that people’s right has increased after Industrial Revolution. Thanks to these drastic changes, human’s a quality of life is too much developed not to control over people’s attitude. We cannot deny the fact that if we do not manipulate proper direction, We will undoubtedly face in danger. I want to take an example for this. In 2017 , there was an accident concerning weapon shooting conducted by New York state in the New York university. To be specific, one man whose name is , Jung Xai Jung , had shot various bullet with consuming Xanax, which is a type of severe drug. In this case, he was another victim when is comes to tragedy circumstance, although he was a mental patient , he could afford to buy the gun by using easy fire-weapon license. Whether he was sick or not , the fact is that a man contributes to lead to death uncountable people. A plenty of doctor used to say that had it not been for these ridiculous legislation , Xai would probably have not murdered human being.
Therefore , I want to insist on appropriate prohibition based on rational decision like by using medicine-chart data or so on. In this regard, I think that banning a few people’s freedom is the best way to maintain social stabilization and structure. Owing to people’s behavior is determined by the social thinking not of their own making, we really needed to take action by using available prohibition.