3. Describe the best teacheryou had in school. Explain why he or she was the best.
The best teacher in my school years is Eun-hee Lee, who was my homeroom teacher when I was a fourth grader in the elementary school. There are several reasons for this. First, she always trusted me in any circumstances regardless of the situation. When I was once late for at the class since I was terribly sick, but I was really worried about getting punished because of that. (어색한 문장입니다. 선생님이 ~하였다 라는 방식으로 설명해주셔야 합니다.) However, she did not chastise me, and instead was concerned about my health. I was so relieved and really appreciated her kind words and care toward her student concerning. Second, her advice really helped me go through my life. (정확한 뜻은 무엇인가요?) Among them, “Don’t underestimate your ability” is my favorite, (She told it? When? How?) and it motivated me my life to go forward.
녹음은 안 했구, 혹시 어색한 문장이 있는지 첨삭받고 싶습니다. 감사합니다!