1. Describe a person you admire
and explain why you admire him or her.
The person I admire is my mother who always
supports me regardless of the situation. I will give an example to demonstrate
this. When I was a middle school student, I once had a really bad grade at the
exam, so I was so depressed and worried that my parents would punish me because
of that. As I expected, I was harshly rebuked for the terrible score by my
father. However, my mother comforted and encouraged me to do better next time. Thanks
to my mother’s support, I could get better scores since the next exam, and finally
graduated at the top of the school.
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