If you are going to choose a roommate, which of the following qualities is the most important to you: (1) Cleanness (2) Friendliness (3) Quietness
I prefer friendliness if I am going to choose a roommate. (It is better to mention "If~"sentence in the first place) First, living with a friendly roommate is less boring. To be specific, we can spend our spare time talking or eating something. This helps me forget about worries and makes me feel better. (In what way?) Second, I am able to save money if I live with a friend who is friendly. For example, when I lived in my college dormitory, (When?) I was close to my roommate. So we shared many materials such as hair dryer or detergent. In this way, we were all gainers of the economy front. (What does it mean?)
*Additional Comment:
- I prefer friendliness 는 다소 어색하게 느껴지므로, the most important quality to choose a roommate is ~로 풀어서 쓰시는 것이 좋겠습니다.
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