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질문 : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Students should evaluate the performance of their teachers."
모범답안 : Students spend most of their time in school. Therefore, they stay most of time with their friends and teacher.
This is why teachers are important to studnts - teachers' influence is powerful.
So some school let students evaluate their teachers' performances by themselves.
I agree with this idea.
First, students' assessment can improve the quality of their school life.
Teachers should get accurate feedback by students, they may become procrastinate.
They'll repeat the materials and be complecent. Finally, students will not be able to get good quality of education.
For example, after my school started this assessment, a lot of teachers tried hard to fit to students.
The result of it was increase of students' satisfaction.
Second, it is fair to evaluation every job in the world. Every job in the world os appraised by somebody else,
such as one's boss, customers, or supervisor.
However, if we prevent teachers from assessing, teachers are not able to change their wrong behaviors.
It will make conflicts between students and teachers, and block students from comfortable school life.
Third, students' evaluation will increase students' self-esteem.
Right to argue their request is going to make students think that school is in student-centered manner.
As their requirements are involved in making the circulation of school, students will voice their opinion.
In the end, students' interesting about school is able to increase.
These are the reasons why student's evaluation of teacher is valuable.
Teachers give students not only knowledge of textbook but also emotional influence.
Futhermore, continued negative effects are deadly to growing teenagers, who don't establish their point of view and lifestyle.
Therefore, it is essential to give students a right to tell teachers about their problems.