It is a
common belief that the personal information of violent criminals should not be
made available to the public. However, there is a more persuasive argument that
publicizing information of violent criminals protects community.
On the
one hand, publicizing the criminals information to the public can victimize the
innocent people. Privacy is a really important factor of current societies and it
should be protected in most of the cases. Disclosing the personal information of
people who committed serious crime has a risk of mistake that other innocent people
is going on a public. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) This would victimise innocent people in the society. For
example, in Korea, a journalist mistakenly uses used an innocent person's people’s picture on his
news and the victim got (구어 축에 속하기도 하고, 어차피 LR에서 점수를 벌어가시려면 이보다 나은 표현을 사용할 수 있어야합니다.) enormous amount of malicious comment. Eventually, the
guy committed suicide. This shows that if the wrong personal information of
criminal is revealed to the go on a public, any innocent individuals can be target and sometimes the
damage cannot be recovered.
Nevertheless,
the publicizing the information of criminal has a role to can protect community. People
have rights to be informed of the nearby factors that can be harmful to them of what can be harmful surround them. Existing
criminals who live near them can be threatening and a really harmful factor. In the case of Japan,
a guy (이것도 구어 축에 속합니다.)who was just released from prison violated neighbour sexually. If the victim
knew that the criminal lived lives near her, she could have been be more careful and it might
not be have happened.
To sum
up, while it is apparent that disclosing the criminals’ personal information
can be risky in many ways, it is undeniable that preventing second conviction
is the first priority for protecting the community.
총평: (7/6/6/5) 6.0
일단은 연습 단계니까 해커스 교재의 근거 (protect community) 등을 차용하시되, 나중에 실전 적응 단계에 접어들면 꼭 교재 도움 없이 나 스스로 쓰는 연습을 해주셔야합니다. 그렇지 않고 시험 치를 경우 머릿속이 하얘지고 연습때만큼 못 나오니까 주의해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)