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During economic crisis, it is important that to be
effective and because of tis, the government should spend less money on arts.
First, with technological advancements, in
modern days, life today moves faster than ever. When the society was
underdeveloped, many people had to spend a tremendous amount of time and effort
finding information they needed. As this (What is it?)is an ineffective way and would be
worsen the economy during an economic crisis, the government should spend more
money on technology. This would not only boost up the economy by employment,
but also could find ways to preserve the environment, for example through
green technology.
Second, by spending more money on
scientific research and not on arts, people can enhance their outlooks and
insights. While growing up, people are immersed by certain types of information
and knowledge about this world through formalized education. The problem with
this is that most of the information and knowledge is conveyed with the
source’s viewpoint and they can easily become shortsighted without having any
chances to broaden their horizon. Therefore in order to effectively have deeper
views of the world, the government should spend more money on scientific research
so that people gain useful knowledge to recover the economic crisis.
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