Some people holds that reading books is a more
satisfying pastime than watching movies. However, in my opinion, I think going
to a movie theater (그냥 theater 이라고 하시면 영화가 아니라 연극으로 오해할 소지가 생깁니다) has a higher level of satisfaction
degree than reading books.
To begin with, movies make plots in movies are more thrilling and exciting. This is
because special sound effects and stimulating graphics
cause the viewers to feel like they’re in the movie. Take the example of me Take my experience for example. Last year, I got an
assignment from my social media professor that to
read or watch “The Lord of the Rings” and make comments about its story. At first, I tried to catch the
story by reading the book. However, I got bored because the book has too many
words and explanations. So, I deflected to
watching the movie. It showed me fantastic valleys and horrible monsters. Plus
I could heard special background music which is was mingled with the scenes and special sound effects during fighting scenes. theses These all things made me engrossed in the
movie. So I surely understood the story line through the movie, and easily done
finished my assignment.
On top of that, movies can offer precious time to families
and friends. In other words, watching movies is
a good way to gather in one place and enjoy common activity. For instance, the
family of one of my friends go to the movie theater every Friday night. Before they
decided to watch a movie together, they are were not that intimate with
each other because of their busy life lives.
They lost conversation and communication and
even could not meet with each other
face-to-face. So, they determined decided
to watch a movie to gather every Friday
night to gather together. The impact is was surprising. After watching movies to gather, they can communicated with each other a lot more because they had same
topic to talk about with each other and by
reducing the stress level, watching movies provided a good
atmosphere to converse. ation with them.
In a nutshell, watching movies can give us more
satisfaction due to their special sound effects and graphics which make them thrilling
and this allows the increasing of the level of intimacy of families and friends by
spending good time with each other. In this
regard, I strongly believe that watching movies are
is a more
satiable hobby than reading books.
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