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The lecturer argues that the hammerhead shark’s body shape does not give the shark a clear advantage. The lecturer doubts the reading’s assertion
that the shark must have some significant evolutionary benefit. Firstly, the speaker says it is untrue that the
hammerhead’s special structure of the head improves vision. According to the reading, its
widely placed eyes are useful to enhance vision, but this is effective only
when the shark sees far-located objects. This rebuffs the reading’s claim that
a lot of experts believe that the unusual structure of the head reinforces the sharks' vision. Secondly, the professor maintains that other sharks
can also have better sense of smell. For example, regular pointed shark, such
as great white, can also smell well. She also mentions that it is not proven that
the hammerhead has a better sense of smell than other sharks. This is in direct
opposition to the reading’s idea that the unique shape of the hammerhead shark’s head reinforces their sense
of smell.
Lastly, the lecturer asserts that hammerhead’s
unique shape does not allow itself to turn fast. To be specific, scientists
figured out that the shark does not use its head but backbone to turn. Its
backbone is flexible, and this is the true reason that makes the shark can turn
quickly. This is contradicting to the reading’s statement that the hammerhead
can turn quickly because of its unique head shape.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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