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There are some people who believe that people should search for information from a single source to be well-informed. However, I personally believe that it is better to get information from a wide range of news for two subsequent reasons. First, a sole source of information is one-sided. Second, there is are so much information that people can not be well-informed from one source. To begin with, there are so many opinions in the world. (Too much simple) To be specific, information can differ on the same issue (It surely be opinion, not information) can vary as people have many divergent backgrounds and experiences. Therefore, to avoid biased information, reading a variety of news sources is highly recommended. I know this from my personal example. I used to watch BBC to broaden my perspectives toward the world, and I just followed and believed opinions in the news report. However, after I watched CNN, which is the American news source, I realized that those broadcasts have different views on identical issues. Since BBC is more leaning to leaned on European perspectives, their criticism is more favorable to Europe than to other continents. In detail, BBC criticized that current government should stop receiving refuges but CNN complemented the action based on their contradictory views. Therefore, one should get information from diverse sources. On top of that, there are too much information in nowadays with the development of. This is because of increased supply of internet. Hence, one news source can not announce all issues around the world and it often omit news that the company thinks unimportant. According to the department of media in the New York university, they tended to select choose a particular news paper and estimated how much they cover international news. (What does it mean?) The result showed that approximately 90% of the newspapers is written about domestic issues each day. (What does it show?) This study clearly illustrates that reading a newspaper, a single news source, is not enough to cover international issues. To sum up, a single news source is highly likely biased and does not cover all issues. In this regard, I strongly believe that one should seek for to information from many news sources to be well-informed.
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Grammar
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Example
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Coherence
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점수
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2
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3
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2
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2
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Score
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Limited 15-17
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- 어떤 방향을 설명하고자 하는 지 에세이에 대략적으로 나타나 있지만 잘못된 문법이나 어색한 표현이 글을 설득력있게 호소하지 못하고 있어요. 예시역시, 전문성이 떨어진다는 느낌이 듭니다.
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