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Your Answer : It is often said that spending time with family has more advantages over being at work. However in my opinion, it is more imperative for people to take time with family for two reasons : it is bad for people's health and it tend to deter them from having nice meeting with their loved one. To begin with, focusing on work time make it hard to keep in health. This is mainly because taking time at workplace tends to cause stress. In other words people are usually stressed out when they spend many times on their work. Also stress is one of the majors factors of sicknesses by weakening the immune system. According to the reading conducted by the Seoul National University of Korean in 2015, test on mice showed that the life span was shortened when they underwent series of electronic shocks. The researcher also pointed out a link between this and human beings who were suffered from periodic stress. This fact pointed out that high stress level from concentrating on employments' affairs can negatively affect humans, resulting in shorter life span. On top of that, it hinder people from having worthwhile time with their liked ones. a lot of people are not be able to care for their family when they invest their l a large amount of time for their jobs. Thus it could give rise to the conflict of family. I'll take my close friend's situation as an example. He was a really successful businessman but total a workaholic, infamous for his dictatorship in the workplace. Although he had a high reputation for his competence in business world, he divorced multiple times and live a lonely life. It implies that money, power and his excellent skills to businesses he gained from his work make not him a truly happy man. To sum up, time spent on work are less essential for work people than time spent on the liked one because it make people unhealthy and reduce valuable family time. In this regard, I strongly disagree with the idea there should be more emphasis on spending time with their loved one than being at work. |