Some people argue that it is better
good (무언가와
비교하고 있지 않으니 better보다
good를 써주세요) choice for
people to gain information from celebrities, magazine or friends when they
purchase something. However, in my opinion, this perspective is not true for
two following reasons which I am going to elaborate. One reason is that searching information when they purchase something makes people save a lot of time. Another reason is that,
in the world we live in, there are many online sites to get information. (두 가지 이유가 너무 비슷합니다.)
To begin with, when they buy something, it is required more favorable for people to gain information from
online sites rather than other methods since it enables people to save their time. To
explain, if one meets with other people to
listen for any commendation, they always have to
spend many some time. However will
time wate wait for you? The answer will
be no (안
어울리는 문장들입니다.). In the world we live in,
time is gold. Since we cannot turn time back, we always
need to read many reviews in a short period of time. A survey was
conducted by UCLA's research department. The survey participants were composed
of one hundred current workers. They were asked that about how do you they
gain information about something whcih you which
they wanted to buy. The result showed
that 78% of the participants answered that they read a lot of revieiws reviews in many sites.
They also said that they were so busy with their
work in the office, so they
did do not have enough time to meet other people or read diverse
magazines. Thus, watching reviews quickly saved a significant amount of time. The remaining 22%
had claimed that they talk about many things related to that they want to buy
with their friends. (이건 굳이 안 넣어도 됩니다.)
On top of that, nowadays there are many types of
sites to watch reviews rapidly in a short time. (위 주장과 비슷합니다.) In detail,
the Internet enables people to gain many a lot of informations which cannot be gained by
one's own effort. Google, You-tube or Naver makes
allows people to
see a lot of reviews quickly and easily. When I was in high
School, I had a hard time adapting to a new
school that I transferred to since my fashion is
was not good. I had trouble hanging out with
peers. Going to school is was merely a
daily routine. However the teacher gave me a lot of tips about searching
information about trends or fashion by using the Internet.
So I did this advice right away. Over time I became
interested in fashion trends and have gained many friends. Come to think of it, it was a
turning point in my life.
On the whole, I believe I accurately demonstrated my point of view on this
matter. To sum up, by reading reviews, people can save a considerable amount of
time. Also there are many sites to see reviews
easily in the present day. In this regard, I think as far as purchasing is
concerned, there is no better way than reading reviews
from online.
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