▶ Topic :
The main
purpose for people who have jobs is for money rather than social status. Agree
or disagree?
Money
stress, future
Social
status stress
I agree
with the statement.
First,
people can find emotional stress by doing things that they want for example,
going on a trip or purchasing new products because it is effective for boosting
people’s moods. Today, many people get weary with too much stress. By earning a
great deal of money however, they can temporarily forget about their problems
and gain some breathing space by dispensing the money on things that they hoped
to do. In this respect, earning a lot of money can be a great means of
invigorating people’s mind than just simply having a social status and striving
to have much money. My personal experience can be used here to explain. Every
morning I wake up in the morning to get through traffic congestion. When I
arrive at work, I read through countless texts . to make matters worse, I have
to deal with my subordinates and my bosses. As a way to reduce my stress, I
often go on a expensive trip abroad. From this I realized that money would
enrich my life than just having a social status.
Second, by
earning a lot of money, people can prepare for their future. What I mean is, as
life expectancy has lengthened and people can live until they reach 100th
birthday, saving money is very significant. In order to do this, many people
work to gain money during their working age in order to prepare for their
future life after their retirement. This emphasizes the importance of earning a
lot of money rather than having a social status.
In
conclusion, I agree that money is more important than social status.
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