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In the lecture, the speaker contends that putting terminally ill patients in nursing homes is not a good idea. She also mentions that the
reality was far from the positive pictures that the reading passage suggesting suggests
that nursing homes is are rational and are good economical
decision for both families and patients.
To begin with, the lecturer states that patients kept in nursing homes
get a notion of being left alone. The patients prefer staying with their family
for the rest of their life lives. However, this is
contradictory to the reading passage that says
patients can socialize in the nursing home and
feel better in the facilities.
In addition, the speaker mentions that nursing homes is are not good economic decisions
either. The Madicaid has more coverage on hiring person people to care than on nursing come service. (이 문장이 무슨 뜻인지 제3자 입장에서 파악하기가 매우 어렵습니다.) The reading which claims that Medicaid
coverage can relieve cost problem for families.
Finally she asserts that
nursing homes is are
in bad condition. The speaker argues that nursing homes
is are often in bad financial shape. As a
result, they hire not enough nurses for the best care. On the other hand, the
author of the reading passage believes that nursing homes provide intensive care for its residents.
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