Some people think that
improving schools is not related to the progress
a country makes. They may think it is not
beneficial for a country. However, in my opinion, developing schools is the
best way for a country to progress. This is because schools make people who can
contribute on a country and schools teach students how
to deal with information.
To begin with, schools
can make devotional people on for a
country. People can know about their country’s situation about the country’s weak points and strong points from schools and it helps them know
their duties for the country. (know는 알다, 라는 뜻이기 때문에, 차라리
learn이나 realize같은 표현들을 써주세요.) As a result, people who know about
their duties for the country can be likely to help the country in the future. Let me take my uncle’s experience as an example. My uncle was a successful businessman.
He had many properties and a lot of money. However, he always spent his money
on his own benefits. Since he did not graduated from any schools school, he did not know his social status and how to
spend money for others. One day, his friend suggested him to go to a schools and my uncle started to study at one schools. (같은 표현을 너무 반복하시는 경향이 있으세요. 대명사 사용을 해 보시는
걸 추천 드립니다.) As time passed by,
he realized his social roles and my his
country’s weaknesses. Thus, he started to spend his
money to help my his community.
On top of that, schools
can teach people how to cope with information.
Nowadays, information is a significant element
to progressing countries by providing economical
benefits. Schools can make people who can handle information and it can help
countries develop. For instance, the Google company is one of the biggest companies in the world. The company makes
a lot of profit through managing information and the company is very beneficial
for their its country. The interesting
story is that people who made the company said that they learned to deal with
information when they were in high school. If their schools are were not developed, they cannot would not have been able to make their company.
To sum
up, I believe that developing schools is a the
best way to for a country to make progress.
progress a country. This is due to the fact that schools can make people
who are devoted to their countries and people can learn about dealing with
information.