Based on their experiences and understanding of the world, some people
might say that they prefer to have smart or considerate friends. However, I
personally prefer to make cheerful friends for two subsequent reasons. First,
they relieve my stress. Second, (왜 안 적으셨죠?)
To begin with, people in the modern society
confront many difficult situations. To be specific, students at school and
employees at their workplace face arduous tasks
and accumulate stress. Hence, consorting with
cheerful friends would help them refresh. For instance, my brother was so
stressed due to school works, that his head became bold bald. However, after he met cheerful friends at the university, his hair began to grow even
though his the amount of stress received from the school did not reduced. This
phenomenon clearly states that having a cheerful
friend is useful for relieving stress. These days, my hair head is getting bold bald,
as my brother had suffered, because I constantly
get stressed from the work. Therefore, I
would like to have such a friend to refresh
myself.
On top of that, a cheerful friend is
helpful. More precisely, such friend can help you stick to the goal. For
example, when I was about to graduate from my
university, I was so nervous because of my
uncertain future. Especially, high unemployment at the time gave me a hard time. (time이란 단어를 한 문장에 두 번 쓰시면 문장이 어색해 집니다.) However, Justin, one of my friends, not only reassured me
but also kept saying that I can will be able
to get a job in the future if I do not give up and keep practicing for
interviews (이게
reassuring하는 게 아닌가요?). Finally, after sending numerous applications, I could
get a job. I would not have been able to get that job if I had no such friend.
Therefore, I would like to have a cheerful friend as he or she will help me
figure out the solution when I face the a tough time in the future. (두 번째 문단에서 I would like to have such a
friend to refresh myself, 즉 그런 친구가 있었으면 좋겠다, 라는 문장으로
끝났는데, 다음 문단에 보니까 이미 있네요. 마지막 문장을
수정하시거나 3번 째 문단을 바꾸시거나 해야 할 것 같아요.)
To sum up, a cheerful friend helps
you relieve stress and reassures you. In this
regard, I want to make a cheerful friend rather than a smart or considerate one.