Some people believe that the Internet has made students to be distracted and feel hard to concentrate on studying be concentrated. However, in my opinion, students can learn more effectively, with the help of the internet.
This is because the Internet provides a lot of information is provided to students and students can access excess to tones of information very easily and quickly.
To begin with, students can learn more effectively with the internet, because there is a lot of information on the internet which is provided to students. Students can easily find various kinds of information when they search it through go to the internet. For example, most of recent students nowadays use their computers to research information and those books, magazines and journals which are needed to research is provided to students on the data base of their universities. Thus, a lot of information is existing on the internet and it is provided to students. Therefore, with the help of the internet, students can learn more effectively, because they can find a lot of information on the internet.
On the top of that, internet the Internet is useful to students' learning, because students can easily excess access to information very quickly. Most of students bring their cell phones and they can find information by typing some key words on the Internet their cell phones. For instance, my father said that he always brought his dictionary with him which is very big and thick, because there was no e-dictionary when he was a student. (It should be written earlier in this sentence) However, many students study more easily and effectively recently, because they have the Internet sources and they only need to bring their cell phones to learn. (What thing?) Therefore, with the help of the internet, students can learn more effectively, because they can excess to the information easily and quickly.
To sum up, Internet gives many benefits to students. This is because a lot of information is provided to students from the internet, and they can access excess to the information very easily and quickly. In this regard, the internet is helpful to students' study
채점기준표
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Grammar
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Contents
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Example
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Coherence
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점수
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2
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3
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2
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2
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Score
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Limited 15-18
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대체적으로 어색한 문장이나 표현들이 많이 보이고 명확한 이유나 주장없이 반복된 구문들만이 사용되었습니다. Internet이 students' learning에 어떤 방식으로 도움이 되는지 설득력있게 주장하여 주세요.
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