There might be some people who believe that making new friends is more important than keep old friends. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. (‘나는 ~~~이라고 생각한다’고 글쓴이의 주장을 명확하면 더 좋습니다.) First, making new friends is more stressful. Second, it is more meaningful to create memories with old friends. (비교급을 쓸 때에는 ‘무엇이’와 ‘무엇보다’를 분명하게 해주세요.)
First of all, it is more stressful for us to make new friends. To be specific, our old friends can understand and know about us better. Also, they will easily offer us a lot of laughter. However, because new friends do not know us well, we should form a bond of sympathy and keep up with the new friends. It carries stressful process and might cause a conflict. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. When I was in college, I joined a riding club and made a new friend named Kevin. At first, he was so fine but as time went by, he did not understand my thoughts and had a conflict with me. As a result, I was stressed out and quit the club. I sometimes thought that if my old friend named Monica had been in the club, I would have been comfortable.
On top of that, a memories with old friends is are more valuable. Although creating memories with new friends is good, it does not have the same value as memories with old friends. Also, remembrance with old friends has a huge effect on our lives. According to a study done by the Korea Times, 80% (숫자와 % 사이에 띄어쓰기 하지 마세요) of respondents said that one of their most unforgettable recalls memories is what they did with their old friends. They added that when they recall memories with old friends, they are so happy but, memories with new friends are less memorable. This clearly shows that creating memories with old friends is more meaningful.
In conclusion, keeping old friends is not only are less stressful, but also, gives us more valuable memories. For these reasons, I firmly believe that keeping old friends are is more beneficial than making new friends.
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