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Some people may think that TV
programs and movies do not have duties to show that good people
are rewarded and bad ones are punished. However, I think that it is
essential to show that good people are rewarded and bad ones
are the opposite in TV programs and movies. This is because mass
media have a great influence on people,
and they can help to form sound social atmosphere.
To begin with, people are
affected by mass media hugely. They usually gain background knowledge of
cultures and societies through news, varied genres of movies and
discussion programs on TV. If right people fail and bad ones succeed on mass
media, some people who are exposed to them would change their minds on
societies and conventions. According to a survey conducted by the University of
California, people who have lived in California agreed that
they had been affected by mass media such as TV or movies. They
responded that when they watched sad ending movies such as 'Dark Night'
which the main character could not save his girlfriend, they wondered and
were ambivalent about their values on societies
and conventions. This indicates that TV programs and movies have
great influence on people.
On top of that, TV programs
and movies are crucial to building sound social
atmosphere. People can learn moral lessons through TV programs and movies that
they should live righteously, if they deal with contents that righteous people
are rewarded and bad ones are punished. For example, when I was in middle
school, I once discussed about contents of TV
programs and movies with my friends. My friends and I both agreed that we had
seen righteous main characters in cartoons and dramas had won in the conflicts
and finally succeeded. In discussions, we could shared a positive atmosphere that kind and right people are
rewarded and bad ones are not, thanks to the
programs that we had seen. We concluded that we
should be right one, so that we can contribute to build a sound society. After more than 10 years
from the day, we could have kept our
values on righteousness, and have tried to contribute
to make a sound society.
To sum up, people are
influenced much by mass media, and TV programs and movies are
important to form sound social atmospheres. For
these reasons, I agree with the statement that TV programs and movies
are obliged to show that good people are rewarded and bad ones are
punished.
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Good (24-30)
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