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The local historical commission is going to block plans for
city development since old buildings are the best interest of the community. Many
experts, on the other hand, are looking on the dark side of maintaining old
buildings according to the reading. However, the lecturer says that old
building still has many advantages.
The professor first insists
that the construction of heritage could make more profits than establishing new
buildings. That is because People from other cities of countries visit the
local places to see historical constructions and spend money in there. This casts
doubt to the reading passage that it costs a lot to maintain old buildings.
Next, the lecturer argues that
old buildings have already been restored. Therefore, old buildings are
strictly safe. City planners are also checking if wiring and plumbing are all
working well. Because of this, the lecturer is against the reading passage that the remained old buildings
contribute to a lower quality of life in local places.
Finally, the professor claims
that all high-esteemed constructions are mixed with old and new style. She also
gives an example of Amsterdam? as a marvelous construction as it keeps the
traditional style and added the new building style. This counters with the
reading passage, saying that the traditional design cannot be compared to the modern
buildings when it comes to the aesthetic quality.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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LIMITED
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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