There has been a heated debate over the issue of whether people in the past are were friendlier than they are today. and Some people might agree with the statement. However, I strongly believe that today's people are friendlier than they were in the past because these days people are well educated and people think good social networks are beneficial in achieving success.
First of all, nowadays people are friendlier than they were in the past because they learn to be kind to others. In present-society, most of countries provide public education to almost all of their citizens whereas people in the past had difficulty in getting easy access to a formal education. When students learn that they should be polite to other people, they are likely to be friendlier then those who does not. Given this, it is not an overstatement to argue that today's people are friendlier than they were in the past. Specifically, the a Korean daily podcast indicated that nearly eighty-five percent surveyed respondents felt that people in the past were not kind and polite. According to them, many of people in the 1960s had difficulty in getting a public education due to poverty. All thing considered, education is really important for people to be friends and thus, people in the past were less friendlier than they are today.
Additionally, people today make an effort to be friendlier in order to achieve success in the future. As our society become became more competitive, it is significantly difficult for young people to achieve success in their lives without any help from other people. As a consequence, social relationships with other people are also considered to be one of the important factors to succeed and young people try to be more polite and friendlier than before. For this reason, I think that today's people are friendlier than they were in the past. Referring to the recent studies (2014) conducted by Seoul National University, the experts argued that young people who were friendlier and had broader social networks had more chances to get job opportunities as well as got a job faster than those who had not. Many of young Koreans including me know the research result and try to be friendly to others.
All in all, education and social networks influence people's friendliness. and Today's people have more opportunities to get education as well as need broad social networks. Therefore, I firmly believe that people in the past were less friendlier than they are these days.
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