Undoubtedly, comprehending the past plays a significant role in people’s lives in many of the place where people play or work. Some people think that comprehending the past allows people to remove obstacles which they are facing now and will face in the future, while others do not think so. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that understanding the past is the key to solve the present and future problems. There are several reasons as follows.
To begin with, the past experiences are able to prevent help people avoid from making analogous mistakes. If people understand the past accurately, they can grasp points of the past problems and solutions. As a result, they can make constant efforts in order to deter people making same mistakes. For example, Texas suffered from an unexpected massive flooding, leading to property damage and thousands of deaths. This was a very rare phenomenon for a state known for a dry weather climate. Many experts were linking this event to the increase in CO2 carbon dioxide mainly caused by driving cars. Their argument is was based on the fact that the number of cars has had been increasing tremendously. After this event, the Texas government acknowledged their problem of ignoring the natural environment and provided affordable and convenient public transit system and poured their funds into renewable energy sources to prevent flooding disasters. This was an effort to prevent same disasters caused by using cars.
In addition, the understanding the past allows people to expect the future event, so people can prepare for it. Historical events tend to be repetitive. If people grasp the historical trend well, they can expect the future with ease. For instance, when I was in college student, I invested my part time wages on stock markets. Because I already knew that the stock price was likely to increase in an inflation economy, and the government’s recent decision establishing sizable new cities for providing to provide suitable job positions would be responsible for inflation in the history. After all, I made a lot of money in stock markets (앞 문장에서 복수로 썼기 때문에) and I could travel the Europe in during my vacation.
All things considered, I strongly believe that the advantages of comprehending the past far outweigh the disadvantages of those it. All in all, comprehending the past experiences is important in the past and in the future. (방금 한 말을 똑같이 반복할 필요는 없음.)
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