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Undoubtedly, experience plays
a significant role in peoples’ daily lives in
many of the places where they work or play. Some people think that visiting a
museum is the best way for people to learn about a country, while others do not. Both sides may have their own reasons to
support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that there is
another more efficient way to learn about a country. There are several reasons
as follows.
To begin with, visiting a
museum makes people have biased views toward a
country. When we go to museums, we usually
listen to the explanation of museum curators.
However, they might have their own personal views, beliefs, and values towards the world. When their personal thoughts are conveyed
to people, people are likely to form a skewed idea of a country. For instance,
France is famous for its culture. The museum named Louvre is one of the
greatest museums in the world. However, they
exhibit artworks which they plundered from other countries. However, (However이란 표현을 너무 반복적으로 사용하는 건 좋지 않습니다. 차라리 on the other hand와 같은 표현들을 사용해주세요.) curators
just explain how France is well-developed in cultural aspects. Their
explanations cannot justify the fact that they
colonized other countries. Therefore, people may only see a narrow part of the
country by just visiting a museum, and even they can have skewed perspectives.
On top of that, there exists another effective way to learn about a country.
Visiting a country provides people with hands-on experience. Museum collections
are only limited to the past, and people can get this kind of knowledge about
historical events from textbooks. Therefore, visiting a museum is of no use to
understand a country. Rather, visiting a country
is better for people to have a better understanding of a country. Direct
experience enables people to have practical knowledge about a country. I will
take my own experience as an example. I have been always always been fascinated with Japan. I have wondered how
the Japanese daily lives would be. Therefore, I made a
plan for to visiting a renowned
museum in Japan. However, contrary to expectations, old artifacts did not have
any impact on me. By chance, I joined a local community cooking club, and I
could learn many things from club activities. I have become to know that
Japanese considered other people by respecting each other when they eat
together. Therefore, I could understand a real culture of Japan through these
hands-on experiences. If I had only visited a
museum, I would not have had real understanding of Japan.
All
things considered, visiting a museum is not the best way to learn about a
country, and there exists another effective way
to get to know other countries. All in all, I
firmly believe that the importance of hands-on experiences cannot be overestimated underestimated in the pursuit of happiness in life.
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