Some people says that communication skills is are not
useful to be a leader or a politician. They believe the most important thing is
one's own ability. (ability의 예시를 들어주세요. Communication skills도
ability니까요) On the
other hand, in my opinion, communication skills are
is most more essential than any other
things to be a leader or a politician. This is because they need others' help
and people's support.
To
begin with, to become a successful leader or
politician, you need other's others’
hand. This is because the meaning of success was completely changed compared to
the past. If it was only focusing on one's own
way and excelling others, now it is different. Along with your own
abilities, it is crucial to have people who can lend a hand when you are in
trouble. Therefore, communication skills are is
very important. The best example of this is my
uncle's story. He was a leader of a company. He was known as a smart person bot
but had poor communication skill. Therefore, he
never did listened to other's others’ opinions. One
day, there was an important affair that needed lots of information from other staff. However, no
one wanted to talk to him. In conclusion, his
enterprise was fall fell.
On
top of that, leaders and politicians need people's support. Even if they have
great abilities, without people's support, they must will lose in society, (두 문장을 합쳐주세요) because the modern society is based on the democracy. Imagine someone who
never communicated with people. who never did any communication with
peoples. Would he can win the poll?
Never. To illustrate this point, I will prevent present
an example. There is one politician who has genius intelligence. Many peer
admire his think thoughts. However, he
never communication communicated with
general people because he is always
scares about it. One day, there is an important
poll and rarely people rarely suggest
him. Therefore, he never got a power in the political
world. (이런 예시를 드실 때는 항상 과거형으로 하시고, 실제
있었던 사례를 대주시는 게 좋아요. 그렇지 않고 이런 식으로 써주시면 설득력이 없습니다)
To
sum up that, communication is very important to leaders and politicians.
This is because it is essential to get not only others' help but also people's
support. In this regard, communication skills are
is useful to be a leader or a politician.