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Some people think that living in a big city provides a lot of advantages for children. However, in my opinion, life in countryside is more advantageous for children compared to life in big cities. The reasons are The core reason behind it is that countryside is safer than big cities and provides a healthy environment.
First of all, rural areas are safer than metropolitan areas. This is because that the crime rate in countryside is lower than the one in big cities. (Need sentence connecting two) A recent research was conducted by the National Statistical Office to determine whether the crime rate in Seoul, the largest city in Korea, is higher compared to the one in countryside. The office stated that the occurrence frequency of crime in Seoul was 0.5% in 2016 while the one in countryside was 0.1%. According to the research, the main reason for the high crime rate in Seoul was unstable social security. Due to the high population in the city, only 3.5 officers per 1,000 inhabitants were available. In contrast, 12 officers per 1,000 residents were available in countryside. Thus, more number of policemen per 1,000 inhabitants were available in rural areas and this led to the lower crime rate. Since safety is an important factor for raising kids, rural areas are much more proper place than big cities.
Second, countryside provides a healthy and natural environment for kids. Rural areas have fresh air and a lot of trees while large cities produce many harmful chemicals from cars, factories, and power plants. And the In addition, this pollutants are highly likely to causes many respiratory diseases such as pneumonia. For example, one of my nephews had suffered from pneumonia. He used to have a hardship for breathing when he had lived in Seoul at that time and always felt hard to breath with stuffy air. So, his parents decided to move into a rural area because they thought that the polluted air in the city is the reason for his disease. After he moved to the countryside, his ailment has been improved and he finally got his health on track.
In a nutshell, by taking safety and a natural environment into consideration, the advantages of living in rural areas far outweigh the disadvantages of it. In this regards, I firmly hold that life in rural areas has more beneficial for children than in big cities.
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