Some people might think that staying in
their town has people feel successful and happier than moving out. Both sides
have their own reasons to support their views. However, if I were asked to
choose one, I would say that it more has to do with success and happiness to
move out than to stay. The rationale behind this is that people can broaden
their perspectives and be successful by moving to new place.
To begin with, when people translocate to
new city, they are likely to have more chances to success. By moving out of the
city where they originally lived, they tend to get a lot of experiences and
broaden their views. For example, when I was in high school, I lived in Jin-Ju
where is a rural area of Korea. I often felt depression thinking that my life
became an exhausted routine. Due to its rural condition, I could not have any pastime
except reading books and writing. However, when I became a freshman, I could
move out to a new city and realize that there were a lot of things to do which
was very interesting. I often went to library and gallery and met so many
people of diverse backgrounds. A plethora of interesting things made me feel
happy and inspired me to write something. By doing this, I could write a lot of
essay which was related to my own experiences. Also, this led me to be hired by
a large newspaper publishing company which required applicants to get a wide
range of experiences. This implies that moving to new city helps people get experiences
and be more successful.
To sum up, I strongly believe that people
are better to move out of their town than to stay. This is because they can
have a variety of thoughts and views through many experiences. All in all, the
importance of experience cannot be overestimated in life.