▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that students do not need to learn basic economics in high school. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for two subsequent reasons. There are personal and social aspects.
First, it is essential to know basic economics in person’s life. To be specific, people must have to know about basic economic concept such as market, tax and account. It is because we live in capitalistic society. At least, The concepts related to the market play a significant role in personal wealth. Let me bring up supposition to explain my assert. (Let 등 구어체 사용 지양해 주세요) There is a person who does not know any concepts about economics. He cannot understand how market is formed and moves. Also he even does not know whether certain level of the price is appropriate to be paid for some services. Therefore, he usually pays incredibly expensive money for his purchase. If he had haven appreciation about basic economic concepts, he could not have buy it that price. (구체성이 결여되어 (예 - 남동생/실존인물 A) 적합한 예시라고 보기 어렵습니다.
Second, there are good advantages in social economy when the members of society learn about basic economics. What this means is that it can prevent businesses from forming wrong price in market. Then, it also can help economic growth because economic corruption can be hindered by citizen having basic economic idea. In addition, according to the recent research done by Seoul National University (채점자가 기관을 인식할 수 있게 이름을 명확하게 서술해주세요), a society that people have a high level of understanding about economics has great economic status, while the other society is not interested in education of economics has low economic status. This clearly shows that education of economics helps society to make better economic environment. (이 예시 또한 구체성 (어떤 국가/사회가 문제를 겪고 있는지/경제적 지식을 통해 발전하는 지 등의 내용) 이 결여되어 (예 - 남동생/실존인물 A) 적합한 예시라고 보기 어렵습니다. In conclusion, learning basic economics can help not only personal property management but also social economic growth. In this regard, I personally believe that all high school students should learn basic economics.
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