People have different viewpoints on whether eating out or at home. Some people may argue that preparing and eating meals at home are better for several reasons. However, in my opinion, going out to restaurants for eating is better for subsequent reasons. First, restaurants have more kinds of foods with high quality. Second, we can save time by eating at restaurants.
To begin with, it is possible to have a variety of tasty foods when we go out for meals. To be specific, restaurants have specialized chefs who have deep insights on what they cook. Professional chefs took a long period of training at educational institutions and kitchens of restaurants. Not only they know how to make appetizing dishes, but they also know how to choose fresh and nutritious ingredients. Therefore, by taking their foods, we can easily enjoy delicious meals and enhance our health. For example, my friend Tom often cooked by himself, because he thought that he had a talent in cooking. But several months later, he changed his mind and started going out for meals. I was curious why he suddenly changed his attitude toward cooking and asked him why he made that decision. Tom told me that for the first two months, he enjoyed preparing food, but after then he realized dishes he can make the number of his recipes was quite limited and he was not good at distinguishing good ingredients. After started eating out, Tom became healthier and enjoyed various various kinds of dishes.
On top of that, people can save time by eating at food stands or ordering foods. This is because cooking requires a huge amount of time. Preparing food seems quite simple, but when we look through a whole process, we can easily find that it is a time consuming activity. According to a survey, conducted by Harvard University, an average time spent for self food preparation for cooking is about 3 hours a day. Simplified cycle of cooking survey revealed is that go for grocery shopping, compare prices, bring back home, cook, do the dishes, clear table and dispose waste. This result clearly shows that ones who do not prepare food can utilize 3 more hours than ones who cook for themselves. By using 3 more hours daily, non-cookers can achieve more valuable results. (What is this?)
To sum, eating at restaurants can give us a variety of foods with fine quality and save our valuable time for other activities. In this regards, I am strongly in favor of the assertion that having meals at restaurants are much better than self-cooking, therefore I prefer eating at the restaurants.
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