▶ Your Answer : Whether it is beneficial that
perfectly understanding the past is important to being able to tackle obstacle
facing us now and in the future is prevalent topic undergoing serious debate.
Two different opinions exist. After considering the opinions from several aspects, personally, I agree with the
idea for two essential reasons: to prevent from making same mistakes things of past and to
grow up/improve myself. Some may oppose to the
opinion, but first it 무엇을 가리키나요? assures that we have to
fully understand our past to be preventing mistakes. While many
consider that it is better to let down just forget about it. We cannot deny the fact
that pasting is the mirror
of the futures. For example, as a college student, I 미완성 On top of that, to strengthen my
viewpoint, we should analyze our past. This is because, we have to know that what we
were is right or not. It may not be favored by the majority of our
society, but I believe that it is true because a only this is the only way is able
to grow up us. Studies at the University of South Carolina have shown
that ~~을 보였다 등 have shown that 뒤에 핵심내용을 제시해줘야합니다///there were two groups. One group was do did not checked their
wrong answers for the math exam math questions when they
studied. While, another group was checked every wrong math
questions. It turned out that a students group of students who checked
their promblems was showed better improvement in their math
level/ability to grow up than the students group who does did not checked their
drawbacks. To conclude, I strongly argue
that my standpoint of the two reasons are topic is sufficiently convincing. The
first is do not occur Firstly, to prevent
the occurrence of same mistakes and to be
developing develop myself. In this regard, I believe that we have to comprehend the
past to make improving improvement in the futures. Writing
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