Various opinions may exist over the argument that whether we should make sure that influential people or potential employers know about our strengths and weakness because if we do not do so, we will not successful in our life. As far as I am concerned, I am in complete agreement with the argument because influential people such as parents can make up the weakness of their children's study and help them develop their talents if they know strength and weakness of their children.
First of all, parents who know well about their children's strength and weakness can make up their children's weak points of study. Opponents of my perspective claim that parents can not influence the study of their children. Their claim may sound a reasonable position on the surface, but after a closer look, it has serious problems. The rationale of their view is unsubstantiated and lack solid evidence for the most parts. To their dismay, there exists an abundance of examples that debunk what they insist. (상대편 주장이 무엇인지, 그리고 그게 왜 잘못되었는지 직접적인 논리와 반박을 제시할 게 아니면 전혀 쓸모가 없는 문장들입니다.) Let me show my personal case to prove that why young students should let their parents know about their weakness of study. When I was in middle school, I wanted really get a A grade at the mathematics class. However I have had difficulty in understanding the "probability" chapter. After mid-term exam, I talked to my parents about that. My parents enrolled me to a mathematics courses in an academy. After I make made up my weakness with the help of my parents, I can could be a successful students in the mathematics class. This examples illustrate that we should make influential person people such as parents know our strength and weakness if we want be successful in our life.
Secondly, parents can play critical roles to develop their children's untapped talents if they know well about their children's strength and weakness. The anecdote that I narrated above is not a the only evidence to support my perspective. In fact, substantial research confirms my view. Let's Let us take a look at the result of a one research results where a vast majority of participants expressed opinions similar to me and argued that young students who want to be successful in their life by finding their talents have to let their parents know their weakness and strength points. According to a the research, nearly two-thirds of the respondents said that as society becomes more complex and faster-changing, it's it is difficult for young students to discover their personal interests and pursue the fields of study which they prefer. This makes it crucial for parents who know about their children's weakness and strengths to help their children to develop their talents and tap into full potential. The children who are under guidance of parents who know their children's weaknesses and strengths discover their talents faster than those who are not. This proves that why we should let our parents know about our strenghth strengths and weaknesses.
All in all, because of the reasons I mentioned above, I firmly believe that we should make sure that influential people such as parents know our strength and weakness. It allows young children to get a good grade in class and to develop their talents.
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