There might be some people who believe that life become harder since than the time when my grandparents were young. However, in my opinion, today's life is much easier than in the past for the two subsequent reasons. First, This is because of the improvement of transportation systems and home appliances helped people have more comfortable life.
First of all, traveling is much more convenient now than it was in the past. Over 60 years, there are have been not only improvement of the existing transportation systems, such as the increased number of subway lines, but also newly invented means, such as the high-speed rail train. According to a research conducted by Korean Railroad Institution, the time and satisfaction of traveling have been dramatically increased (시간과 만족이 늘었다? time과 satisfaction에 각각 다른 동사가 필요하겠네요.) over a few generation. This is because, in the past, the only way to travel from Seoul to Busan was a small and uncomfortable bus, which took more than 8 hours. However, theses days, the KTX, which is a high-speed rail train, reduces the time of the journey to 3 hours and offers a comfortable seats. Even though many of the younger generation do not know the differences between the old buses and the new trains, the older people often says that the development of the KTX train is very innovation innovative in that it is time-efficient and much convenient. This clearly shows that the means of transportation has been so greatly improved that people today travel in a more convenient and faster way.
In addition to that, people live in an easier society thanks to the advent invention of many devices. To be specific, dishwashers, vacuum cleaners and washing machines allowed people to have no more less difficulty in doing household chores. For example, my mother used to have a hard time washing dishes after every meals. It demands a lot of energy, and gave her severe stress. However, with the automatic dishwasher, the only thing she had to do during cleaning to have the dishes washed is just to put the dishes in the machine and to simply push of the button. It also takes a half of the time compared to hand-wash the time doing the dishes by hand. Now, she is no more under a lot of stress because of her chores. If it were not for the dishwasher, she would probably have been stressed out.
To sum up, the development of transportation methods and newly invented household appliances let life today be more easier than it was in the past. In these regard, I think people live easier life compared to people in the past.
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