There might be some people who believe that teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers, business CEOs. However I personally disagree with the above idea for two subsequent reasons. (‘나는 ~~~이라고 생각한다’고 글쓴이의 주장을 명확하면 더 좋습니다.) First, teachers cannot be motivated by a lot of money. Second, teachers are less stressful jobs.
To begin with, teachers will not be motivated by money. To be specific, teachers should not focus on a lot of money how much they are paid because their role is growing students as mature adults. Teachers usually feel motivated when their students go to the right direction and be successful. Also, teachers should concentrate their value to their students’ achievement. However if teachers are paid a plenty of money, people who are not interested in students would even want to be teachers without mind of loving students. Let me bring up my mother’s story as an example. She is a high school literature teacher. At first, she complained about her low salary. However, as time went by, she was so fine because their students became successful leaders. She sometimes says that seeing students grow up greatly is more valuable than making a lot of money.
On top of that, teachers are less stressed. This is because doctors, lawyers and CEOs are very demanding, require more responsibility, and have longer working hours. Even more, they have no time to spend with their friends and family. However, teachers have enough time to spend with their loved ones, which makes teachers live a well-balanced life. According to a study done by the Korea Times, 80% of CEOs, lawyers and doctors said that they do not have time to spend with their friends and family so they feel lonely. They added that they do not need a lot of money and they want to spend time with their loved ones. This shows that teachers are less stressful jobs so they do not have to be paid as much as doctors, lawyers and CEOs.
In conclusion, a plenty of money cannot be means of motivation for teachers. Not only that, doctors, lawyers and business CEOs are more stressful jobs than teachers. For these reasons, teachers should not be paid as much as doctors, lawyers and CEOs.
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