▶ Your Answer :
Various opinions may exist over the argument on whether a person should
never make an important decision alone. As far as I am concerned, I am in
complete agreement with the argument. The two ideas stated below can be valid
evidence to support my view.
First of all, people can reduce possible errors when they make significant decisions together. In other words, People can make lots of mistakes when they decide something alone because people are easily shortsighted without
other’s help. By sharing the information and knowledge about the problems with
friends or colleagues, however, people are highly able to consider the issue thoroughly and get higher chances to make better decisions. According to a
recent survey conducted by Stanford University, most of the surveyed
respondents who are now heads of team in companies answered that they were
strongly helped by sharing and communicating with others, such as colleagues or
bosses, about the problems. They also responded that they
might not have known how to cope with the problems of the projects in the
workplace without the advice.
One top of that, making decisions and sharing the problems together
is an excellent way of improving insights and outlooks of handling the problem.
Generally, people do not have chances to broaden their perspectives when
they just decide by themselves. Thus, they can enhance their ability to decide
better ways by interacting with others who have more experience regarding
problems or know more about the issues. My experience can be used to support my
view. When I became a president of an activity club in my college, I tried to find
the ways on how to manage our financial matters. However, I did not have much
information and knowledge about the finance and made many errors
and bad decisions several times. Hence, as a way to handle this problem, I
tried to discuss this with other members of my club. Even though it took more time,
I finally could make much better right decision from their advice, and I
learned potential benefits of how to be a leader in the future and gained a lot of
firsthand experience whenever I decide to do.
To sum up, I believe that my explanation can sufficiently prove the
advantages of making decisions together. Obviously, the significance of decline in the number of decision errors along with gaining insights and perspectives cannot be
overemphasized enough.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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