▶ Your Answer : As society discourages sexism and the number
of working parents grows, it seems like there is not much time for children to
be taken care of by their parents. Some people might say that not many parents
don’t pay enough attention to nurturing their children. Contrary to common belief,
I personally think that parents still spend lots of time taking care of their
children for two reasons. (새로운 문장으로 시작해주세요.) There are many entertaining places and company
provides welfare. First of all, various theme parks of entertaining
centers where children can enjoy with their parents exist. It is obvious that those
kinds (단수/복수) of facilities offer exciting and enjoyable experiences to both parents and
children. Parents can take their sons of daughters there and have fun with them
easily utilizing many entertaining programs there. For example, my uncle, who is
a CEO of his company, has a three(아라비아 숫자 사용을 지양해주세요)-year-old daughter. He is usually extremely busy on
weekdays so that he used to want to take a rest, doing nothing in house and did not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요.) play with his daughter. But once a huge shopping and entertaining center, which
consists (주어 동사 불일치) of sports theme park and water park, was built in front of his house,
he started to bring his child there and have had really fun time with her every
weekend. Had it (대소문자 구분) not been for those facilities, he might not have been able to
enjoy valuable time (띄어쓰기) with his child.
Moreover, many (대소문자 구분) companies have welfare policy
for those who nurture children. It is undeniable that people prefer companies
that provide a lot of time to go on a (전치사, 관사) vacation. In this regard, in order to attract competitive
applicants, major companies allow their employees to have enough time with their
child. This can play a significant role for parents in spending time with their
family. For instance, according to the survey conducted by The Administration
of Labor of Korea in 2018, subjects who had been working as an officer for were
asked to answer several questions related to their working environment. And there
was a notable result about their vacation. (and으로 문장을 시작하지 말아주세요.) The majority of subjects who had a
lot of paid vacation answered that they spent more time with their children
than those who do not have (목적어가 무엇인가요?). This result shows that companies' (소유격 표시) vacation offering can be
a key motivation to take care of their sons and daughters.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that parents
still spend a lot of time taking care of their children. All in all, as long as
parents prize their time with their family, parents will spend more time playing
and having fun with them. Time (단수/복수) spent with children cannot be underestimated
for quality life. |