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The lecturer objects to the points in the
reading passage made about benefits that working four days a week instead of
working five days a week brings about profits. The speaker states that the
notions in the reading have flaws.
First, the speaker says that the author's
claim about the fact that four-day working gives companies benefits is wrong.
He insists that the reading needs a closer look. If companies apply to this
option, they need to hire more people, which means that spend more money on
medical insurance and training gree hands. Moreover, companies have to provide
a computer with a workplace for a new employee, indicating that they cannot
save money compared to five days working. Therefore, this casts doubt on the
writer's claim that less working increase employees' efficiency, which
stimulates them to bring better outcomes.
Second, the lecturer points out that the
assertion regarding reducing the unemployment rate by decreasing working hours per
person is mistaken. It is hasty to conclude just by looking at the reading
view. The CEOs of companies expect the same amount of five-days work for
four days, this makes them disappointed and fire their employees. Consequently,
the unemployment rate will be increased. Furthermore, employees have fewer time to
be a skilled person, followed by damaging companies' profits. Thus, this goes
against the author's claim that reducing working time facilitates companies to
hire more people.
Finally, the professor contends that the
opinion concerning increasing life quality by spending spare time relaxing is
flawed. The reading passage is missing some key points. By time workers spend
less time in companies. their salary would be reduced, having difficulty
subsiding in a city. This is in direct opposition to the writer's view that
less working a week stimulates workers to improve their lives' qualities.
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